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04.03.2012 16:26
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Poprawa tekstu po angielsku.

Witam. Jako, iż anglikiem nie jestem i po angielsku za dobrze nie umiem pisać, proszę o sprawdzenie i ewentualną poprawę poniższego tekstu:

In my opinion, is the most important invention of electricity. Nikola Tesla invented alternating current. With electricity, it was possible futher development: light bulb, computer, home electronic.

Another important invention of the steam engine. It was invented by James Watt in 1763. With the engine it was possible to build a steamship in 1806. It developed the weaving industry. One engine could propel some 100 looms.
Another important invention of the wheel. Was invented around 4000 BC. It served mainly to carry heavier items.

Z góry dzięki!
PS Przyznaję, że część tekstu zerżnięta z googla translate.

04.03.2012 17:49
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04.03.2012 19:06
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04.03.2012 19:09
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04.03.2012 19:17
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In my opinion, electricity is the most important invention. Nikola Tesla invented alternative current. Further development was possible owing to electricity: light bulb, computer, home electronic devices.

Another important invention was the steam engine. It was invented by James Watt in 1763. With this kind of engine it was possible to build a steamship in 1806. It developed the weaving industry. One engine could propel some 100 looms.
Another important invention is the wheel. It was invented around 4000 BC. It served mainly to carry heavy items.

04.03.2012 19:50
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