Mógłby ktoś sprawdzić moje zadanie z angielskiego i nanieść ewentualne poprawki? Z góry wielkie dzięki.
Environmental pollution and global warming are the biggest problems of the modern world. The first thing we or actually the government should do, is to improve public transport. Then the citizens won’t use their cars so often, and air would be cleaner. And if that happens we’ll all be happier.
The authorities should also create more parks, plant more trees or make green areas, so people, and not only them, would have more oxygen. Than of course the pollution will be decreased.
Every one of us can contribute to make our towns cleaner. We should try to do something to protect our natural environment. The easiest way is to separate our rubbish and to avoid driving by cars and buy environmental friendly products. Unless we try to do something to protect the environment, the next generation will find the worse living conditions.
Secondly we should invest in clean, renewable sources of energy. If we use them, we will reduce carbon emission and protect ozone layer. Then we will avoid many natural risks; floods, hurricanes, drought and protect endangered species.
Moreover technology is making the world a better place. Firstly, technology has a very positive impact on many fields like science, engineering and medicine. The majority of inventions is assisting people with them everyday life and make it more comfortable. The computer is an invention that the most revolutionize our life. Today we don't imagine the world without computers. They are everywhere: in a work, school and home. We use them for education, work and entertaiment.
All in all, there are many things we and the government shall do to make our world more cleaner, less polluted.
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And if that happens we would all be happier.
If we use them, we could reduce carbon emission and protect ozone layer
Te dwa błędy znalazłem, generalnie gramatyka ok.
,,and not only them, would have more oxygen'' - i nie tylko nich ? Powinno być ''and not only they would have more oxygen ''
,,would have more oxygen. Than of course the pollution will be decreased. '' - tutaj coś skopałeś bo powinno być ,, would have more oxygen, then a level of pollution will be decreased '' - w sensie, że wówczas poziom zanieczyszczać zostanie zmniejszony. ( than - niż / then - potem, wówczas ).
,,environmental friendly products.'' - prawie dobrze. Environmentally friendly products
,, and buy environmental friendly products. Unless we try to do something to protect the environment, the next generation will find the worse living conditions. '' - tutaj nie bardzo rozumiem o co Ci chodziło. Domyślam się że 'jeżeli nie spróbujemy zrobić czegoś żeby chronić środowisko, następna generacja zastanie gorsze warunki życia'', ja bym jednak napisał używając 'the second conditional' czyli. ,, and but environmentally friendly products because if we didn't protect the environment, then the next generation would find worse living conditions''.
,,endangered species.'' - lepiej ''species in danger of extinction''
,,Moreover technology is making the world a better place.'' - prawie. albo ,,moreover, technology makes the world a better place to live. albo ,, moreover, technology is making the world a better place to live these days .
,, The majority of inventions is assisting people'' - 'are'
,, The computer is an invention that the most revolutionize our life.'' - which mostly revolutionize our life/lifestyle
,,They are everywhere: in a work, school and home. We use them for education, work and entertaiment. '' - ''at work, school, home'', ''we use them in education, at work, i możesz napisać że 'and most of all, in entertainment'.
Reszta ok, generalnie pozytywnie.
Environmental pollution and global warming are the biggest problems of the modern world. The first thing we (or the government, actually) should do, is to improve public transport. The citizens, then, won’t use their cars so often, and air would get cleaner. And if that happens we would all be happier.
The authorities should also create more parks, plant more trees or make green areas, so people, and not only them, would have more oxygen. Then - of course - pollution will decrease.
Every one of us can contribute to make our towns cleaner. We should try to do something to protect our natural environment. The easiest way is to separate our trash, avoid driving cars and buy environmentally friendly products. Unless we try to do something to protect the environment, the next generation will find their living conditions worse.
Secondly we should invest in clean, renewable sources of energy. Should we use them, we would reduce carbon emission and protect the ozone layer. Then we will avoid many natural risks; floods, hurricanes, droughts and protect endangered species.
Moreover, technology is making the world a better place. Firstly, technology has a very positive impact on many fields like science, engineering and medicine. The majority of inventions are assisting people with their everyday lives and make them more comfortable. Computers are an invention, which revolutionizes our lives the most. Today we can't imagine the world without computers. They are everywhere: at work, school and home. We use them for education, work and entertaiment.
All in all, there are many things we and the government are able to make our world a cleaner, less polluted place.
Głównie stylistyka, odrobina składni. Jak na poziom gimnazjum/wczesnego liceum (?) i tak było spoko.
